Tassen Spellbinder

First, I had no idea that that had just been put up on writegooder. Second, that post is so incredibly useful! Thanks a million!

Excellent! The formatting worked! I honestly already have a part 6 written, but I wanted to break things up a bit. Unfortunately, the only way to keep the length on ...

To those of you (if any) who have been waiting for this, I apologize for the lateness. To those of you (me included) who thought the above sounded really arrogant, ...

So, I'm seriously thinking about trying to get some of my work published some day. If I dump a novel on here, could that conceivably have copyright issues later?

I see nothing you could improve, besides to possibly warn people at the top that they'll need tissue.

YWS is the best group of writers on the web. -Tassen Spellbinder

Excellent poem. My only critique would be that you should probably capitalize "saint jerome," unless the lowercase was an intentional slight, in which case, your poem takes a whole different ...

This is, as headintheclouds says, beautiful. I have but one comment for you- I would figure out a way to rewrite this bit: "for I must fight for the saving ...

Before I start the reviews, let me say that I liked this. The first thing that I noticed is the italics. Is there any particular reason? It's not bad, it's ...

Very good poem. My one major issue with it is in this line: "Our hearts beat in perfect collision" I don't think that at all keeps the rhythm, and just ...

My only suggestion for this poem would be to make all the verses the same number of lines, instead of 4, 5, 5. That aside, I've got nothing to say. ...

Wow. You guys totally got me. I was thinking "what?! This is a music video..." You got me. And I feel really dumb now. But it is something Obama might ...

Part for of my wonderful (I hope) pet project Chronicles of the Abandoned. One can safely assume this carries with it a language warning (I forget it there's coarse language ...

I just have one suggestion for this poem: for the line "Blood and bodies till the end of your sight;" you may consider writing it as "Blood and bodies, no ...

First, let me start by saying I liked this poem. That aside, I have a few suggestions. Suggestion 1: Capitalization and punctuation. This poem needs more of both. I would ...